renku

[whimsicaldeb]

cold darkness
distant sounds

a woman types
in deep concentration
dreamily

~~~
?
hmmmm... is this a renku?

Feedback please. I'm trying out renku...
http://renku.home.att.net/index.html

It's not easy! For me anyway.
thanks

[whimsicaldeb]

descending evening
a woman in concentration
dreaming

[Doreen Peri]

I have never known
differences between
senryu, haiku, renku.
tanka much.
i adore verse
formats, women
ascending
stairs to find
syllables waiting
to embrace!

[whimsicaldeb]

I found this website yesterday ...
http://www.brooksbookshaiku.com/welch/contents.html
"An Open Window ~ haiku & photographs by Michael Dylan Welch"




and I fell in love with this guy's work ...

On his bio page, he speaks of renku and I wanted to find out more about it; and try it for myself. I may love it, but I've got a long, long way to go, to get to where he already is.