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renku
Posted: November 12th, 2005, 11:06 pm
by whimsicaldeb
cold darkness
distant sounds
a woman types
in deep concentration
dreamily
~~~
?
hmmmm... is this a renku?
Feedback please. I'm trying out renku...
http://renku.home.att.net/index.html
It's not easy! For me anyway.
thanks
Posted: November 12th, 2005, 11:10 pm
by whimsicaldeb
descending evening
a woman in concentration
dreaming
Posted: November 13th, 2005, 12:18 am
by Doreen Peri
I have never known
differences between
senryu, haiku, renku.
tanka much.
i adore verse
formats, women
ascending
stairs to find
syllables waiting
to embrace!
Posted: November 13th, 2005, 7:35 pm
by whimsicaldeb
I found this website yesterday ...
http://www.brooksbookshaiku.com/welch/contents.html
"An Open Window ~ haiku & photographs by Michael Dylan Welch"
and I fell in love with this guy's work ...
On his bio page, he speaks of renku and I wanted to find out more about it; and try it for myself. I may love it, but I've got a long, long way to go, to get to where he already is.