colds suck

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Axanderdeath
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colds suck

Post by Axanderdeath » November 15th, 2005, 8:33 pm

Sore throat fo weeks
and rain and snow.\
and the morning time is the only time I like
i die ech night for the morning

drinking bottle of beer and thinking
"shit" I whisper
under my mad
man hands, with
wet sad eys thaty glare back
in mirror of cracks
and yellow what use to
be be white wall

and the cold creeps in
and falls in hard

white whitew flakes saying that the whole worlds about to daie and then be born out of frozeen isolation and cold!
thus spoke G.A.P.

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Post by mnaz » November 18th, 2005, 1:36 am

I like.


Winter is a disease.

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Post by Axanderdeath » November 18th, 2005, 10:41 am

mnaz wrote:I like.


Winter is a disease.
heart break is a disease

winter just is a bad time to be...
thus spoke G.A.P.

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