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Burning Away the Fog

Posted: December 4th, 2005, 11:59 am
by WIREMAN
Burning away the fog
..........@ 10:47 am.

illuminated keyboard,

smoke rising to the south,

clouds parting above,

seagulls in frenzied flight,

handshake deals goin down
on Baltimore St.....

David....
keeping vigil....
2 busts of him,

Huge!

looming overhead as the
prostitutes ply their trade,

where they buy their fixes
all the live long day,

beneath the Sun,
burning away the fog.......................

Posted: December 4th, 2005, 3:31 pm
by hester_prynne
A look out a morning window,
far beyond the see.

Nicely done Mark.
H 8)

Posted: December 4th, 2005, 4:12 pm
by Artguy
Things seem as they are seen...beautiful piece...it puts me there....

Posted: December 4th, 2005, 10:14 pm
by tinkerjack
A million weary miles of staring into a fog it seems. I finally learned to hide until the sun was high. SO all through the peace I felt so happy to have my fear burn away with that fog, But on the other hand I kind of felt sorry for the deal exposed.

just perfect picture
seeing is believing :D