Fence Patroled by Invisible Dog

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Fence Patroled by Invisible Dog

Post by e_dog » October 5th, 2004, 3:01 pm

the borders of the soul
are the borders of the universe?

the blade that shaves
Existence into nothingness

a block of cheddar
against the grate

and then the thumb

and then
the bone

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Post by mnaz » October 7th, 2004, 5:17 am

yes.

the soul, even beyond what consciousness will ever admit, is the universe, for all I know at this point...


(and I don't care much for fences.... or invisible dogs)

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Post by Lightning Rod » October 7th, 2004, 11:34 am

an even better sentinel is the Rumor of an Ivisible dog

good one, dog

mnaz, various metaphysicians have speculated on the location of the soul when it has always been obvious to me that my soul is located in my brain and occasionally migrates to my pecker.
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by e_dog » October 7th, 2004, 1:24 pm

this is indeed a great philosophy of the soul of man:

"various metaphysicians have speculated on the location of the soul when it has always been obvious to me that my soul is located in my brain and occasionally migrates to my pecker."

but where do you stand on the question of immortality?

i was just listening to Jim Morrison's American prayer, in one of the poems he laments the death of his cock, in an almost religious, catholic sermon. is there an easter, a rebirth of the spirit? Hosanna Viagra, Espiritu Sancti?

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Post by mnaz » October 7th, 2004, 6:19 pm

sounds reasonable to me.

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