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The heavy
Posted: December 13th, 2005, 8:05 pm
by mpc
Pushing with their noses,
solar fish nudge craters open.
This song marks the beginnings of a bridge
rising over the roadway. Pink hail
freezing in a rainpipe.
Words sharing one bed, a spangle of bracelets
broken. (the muscles in her arms roll;
her paste jewelry comes down in pieces)
Posted: December 13th, 2005, 9:53 pm
by Doreen Peri
You, sir, have a way with slinging a phrase. Good writing here. Love the images. Welcome to the Studio! Little birdie told me I might know you from another board but I don't think so.... or do I? Hmmmm.....
Post more! Love it!
Posted: December 14th, 2005, 12:30 pm
by joel
doreen peri wrote:
Post more! Love it!
Dude, yes. Amen!
The images you string together are charged with amazing colors and movement! I'm just reading and rereading and loving it!
Posted: December 14th, 2005, 2:04 pm
by mpc
doreen peri wrote:You, sir, have a way with slinging a phrase. Good writing here. Love the images. Welcome to the Studio!
Thanks, Doreen.
Little birdie told me I might know you from another board but I don't think so.... or do I? Hmmmm.....
Think about squirrels.
Posted: December 14th, 2005, 2:06 pm
by mpc
joel wrote:
Dude, yes. Amen!
The images you string together are charged with amazing colors and movement! I'm just reading and rereading and loving it!
Thanks, joel. I've been reading some of your stuff, and think it's great. When I have time I'll have to go back to your poems and post some of my thoughts.