Well done, Integrity.

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joel
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Well done, Integrity.

Post by joel » January 21st, 2006, 5:24 pm

Well done, Integrity.
You maintained you perfectly
alien from memory
distorted deep in deepest me.

Damn fine, Integrity—
just the way you said you’d be:
proof-of-purchase guarantee
of truth above love charity.

Thank you, Integrity,
for your lesson cruelty.
Teacher, teach me honest see
what you I love need not love me.

Go on, Integrity;
get your hell away from me.
Full of truth, ungracefully
remind me love is never free.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Post by mnaz » January 22nd, 2006, 3:07 am

Nice flow. And the first stanza reminds me of my longstanding confusion and conviction on the subject, often in nearly the same waking moment.

Me? I always thought of integrity as moving in a direction
somewhat opposite hell, and not disassociated from love charity, but perhaps I misunderstand your meaning here, in this context.

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