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The Big Picture

Posted: January 23rd, 2006, 4:54 am
by mnaz
Keep your eye on the big picture.
Watch its hair-trigger lens.
I can't fix a wide angle from space junk,
Nor killer screws loose from Sputnik,
Nor pillow-wisp hurricanes, too quiet,
Nor Apollo's porch on the moon,
Thumb-blue lifeboat rising.
Out too far.
Nor across oceans of salt-air sleep,
Nor across deserts of indifference,
Nor from the ancient city's edge,
Concussions of the righteous,
Muffled, ageless bombs....
Still out too far.
Nor from next-door in utter terror,
Neighbors crushed under rubble,
Nor from sacred canons of war,
Staked by a mother's anguish,
Because now we're too close.
Refocus the lens, recede
Back into the big picture.

Posted: January 23rd, 2006, 9:46 am
by Arcadia
I like it!
saludos,

Arcadia

Posted: January 23rd, 2006, 3:36 pm
by mnaz
Thx, Arcadia.

That one's been kickin' around....
Now I can bury it-- move on out of these midwinter blues....

Re: The Big Picture

Posted: January 24th, 2006, 2:51 pm
by joel
mnaz wrote: Nor Apollo's porch on the moon
This one grabbed me--I am really enjoying the image of the Apollo's porch (which in my mind is kind of the footstool of the constant sun) on the moon (which is phased in and out and less than constant).

May I ask what was intended with it? I like it. Intrigueing (spelling?).

Posted: January 25th, 2006, 7:31 pm
by mnaz
Well Joel, I wish I could say I plumbed the richness of mythology for this one, but really, what I had in mind was NASA's Apollo moon landings. I hope this doesn't come as too much of a disappointment....

Posted: January 25th, 2006, 7:41 pm
by joel
No way! Much cooler! I hadn't picked up on that at all...so it's just rock(et)ing my world on a whole nother level. Dude....