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if i could introduce billie holiday

Posted: January 30th, 2006, 3:33 pm
by joel
“There’s nothing left,” I quipped, “to entertain
between our lives if you’re unsure of my
devotion.” So she answered me, “Too bad
we can’t explore realities beyond
pure surety.” And I replied, “But if
I can’t rely on trust that you will trust
the words I love you, how am I to prove
consistency and faithfulness and love?”
She held her words like silent breath, “And must
you prove yourself to me?” I tried to shift
the conversation; she replied,
“I’m fond
of you, but too aware how fickle sad
emotions are.” Words couldn’t satisfy
her; and she whispered:
“Hush now. Don’t explain.”

Posted: January 30th, 2006, 4:19 pm
by sooZen
I would listen to her.

nice scenario...left me wondering and i love wonderment.

Posted: January 30th, 2006, 7:26 pm
by Arcadia
I like the end of the poem! (also the rest)

Posted: January 30th, 2006, 8:20 pm
by Doreen Peri
a lovely snapshot of a moment.

Posted: February 24th, 2006, 4:02 am
by alienpoet
i enjoyed this ,nicely done.love the title!

Re: if i could introduce billie holiday

Posted: February 24th, 2006, 11:10 am
by Axanderdeath
joel wrote:“There’s nothing left,” I quipped, “to entertain
between our lives if you’re unsure of my
devotion.” So she answered me, “Too bad
we can’t explore realities beyond
pure surety.” And I replied, “But if
I can’t rely on trust that you will trust
the words I love you, how am I to prove
consistency and faithfulness and love?”
She held her words like silent breath, “And must
you prove yourself to me?” I tried to shift
the conversation; she replied,
“I’m fond
of you, but too aware how fickle sad
emotions are.” Words couldn’t satisfy
her; and she whispered:
“Hush now. Don’t explain.”
I don't know what to say only--

I wish I could turn the love part of my brain off for a bit...

Posted: February 26th, 2006, 10:25 am
by Ann Bingham
Nice write.

love lots