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~K
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Hit or Miss

Post by ~K » April 2nd, 2006, 6:40 am

I love the simplicity
of targets &
sharpened points.

Clarity is rare
in my part of
the woods.*

But I tell you what,
there isn't anyone I know
who does not oppose
at least 3
of my ideas.

But then again I am
an optimistic bastard.

I still believe
a happy ending
waits at the
end of
everything.






* Michigan...sigh...

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Post by Ann Bingham » April 2nd, 2006, 9:05 am

intresting the game of darts with you as the target. There is no clerity in my neck of the wods either; I think even less then in your neck.

And I think hter is three 'concepts' of our personal selfs that others can not or will not accept.


Thanks for the read.



love lots

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Post by ~K » April 2nd, 2006, 9:11 am

"And I think hter is three 'concepts' of our personal selfs that others can not or will not accept. "


Please expound upon this thought.

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Post by ~K » April 2nd, 2006, 9:18 am

p.s.

Speaking of darts, Cricket is my favorite game , Ever. My best is a 5 round out...If you know what that means feel free to oooh & ahhhh. :)

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Post by Ann Bingham » April 2nd, 2006, 1:30 pm

I haven't a clue what the hell Cricket is except that I think it is a yard game through which you putt balls around a course through wires.


As for concepts everyone disagrees on... religion, politics, and life in general-the way it should be lived. Whether a person has the right to die with dignity, or be left to suffer needlessly through machines.


Just thoughts.

Deb.

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Post by tinkerjack » April 2nd, 2006, 3:01 pm

Touch and Go
In a clear blue Michigan sky
A cold morning and how that little single engine plane loved it

Dense air so aerodynamically friendly

The Patch work of farms in Lenawee county below me. Sunshine on the windshield.

Touch and go
Come on down roll a ways down the runway and up again
practicing take off and landings

Michigan 1965

Cricket is baseball Ann, seems like every good thing we got in our culture we ripped off from them. I love listening to the cricket scores on the BBC overnight show, incomprehensible to me too. Incredible scores, 101 to 78 and exotic sounding cities, Calcutta needing only twenty-six runs to win the test match. Something soothing about mundane things like sports. The international situation in the hands of men always so desperate, it is almost like a lullaby to listen to a baseball game as you doze in your reading chair.

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Post by abstroint » April 7th, 2006, 7:26 am

I love the simplicity
of targets &
sharpened points.
nice optimistic peace

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Post by joel » April 7th, 2006, 2:31 pm

I used to play Cricket. I hit the ball through a dean's window in college. I didn't get caught and I stopped playing Cricket. Simplicity.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Post by mousey1 » April 8th, 2006, 11:31 am

Hit or miss...just watch out for the fucking darts..."the slings and arrows" of dark misfortune and tastey delights.

Yeah, I'm optimistic too...silly bastard! :)
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by muted » April 9th, 2006, 2:41 am

"I still believe
a happy ending
waits at the
end of
everything."


happiness lays latent
in every moment
from beginnings
to eternity....
where there is no end to be found......

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