poem in the key of green minor

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e_dog
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poem in the key of green minor

Post by e_dog » October 18th, 2004, 7:22 pm

she was selling
free love
anything you wanted
but never understood

the windows were frozen
shut
a spider was caught
by its own web

and underneath
the grand piano
was a stolen shoe
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Post by mnaz » October 20th, 2004, 2:25 am

It could be that most everything I've ever wanted,
I didn't understand.
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Totenkopf

Post by Totenkopf » March 11th, 2008, 7:17 am

underneath
the grand piano
was a stolen shoe

Bra vo and sans the plathian soap
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Post by mnaz » March 11th, 2008, 1:38 pm

'selling free love'

nice trick. reminds me of iraq.
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Post by Lightning Rod » March 11th, 2008, 1:57 pm

dawg--
very evocative poem
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye
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Post by hester_prynne » March 12th, 2008, 3:03 am

Fabulous read Edawgie.
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"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW
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