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poem in the key of green minor

Posted: October 18th, 2004, 7:22 pm
by e_dog
she was selling
free love
anything you wanted
but never understood

the windows were frozen
shut
a spider was caught
by its own web

and underneath
the grand piano
was a stolen shoe

Posted: October 20th, 2004, 2:25 am
by mnaz
It could be that most everything I've ever wanted,
I didn't understand.

Posted: March 11th, 2008, 7:17 am
by Totenkopf
underneath
the grand piano
was a stolen shoe

Bra vo and sans the plathian soap

Posted: March 11th, 2008, 1:38 pm
by mnaz
'selling free love'

nice trick. reminds me of iraq.

Posted: March 11th, 2008, 1:57 pm
by Lightning Rod
dawg--
very evocative poem

Posted: March 12th, 2008, 3:03 am
by hester_prynne
Fabulous read Edawgie.
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