rats everywhere

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Arcadia
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rats everywhere

Post by Arcadia » May 17th, 2006, 9:57 am

(you thought it was a kid's joke
until you saw them with your own eyes...)
what happened with your detective mind?

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Post by mnaz » May 17th, 2006, 10:35 am

Some still don't see the rats, even now....

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Re: rats everywhere

Post by joel » May 17th, 2006, 10:47 am

Arcadia wrote:what happened with your detective mind?
What happened with my detective mind?

(I never got the joke and didn't recognize
the things I saw; valiant effort aside,)
I've sometimes failed in my private I.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Post by stilltrucking » May 17th, 2006, 11:47 am

interesting post

Does it have something to do with school or are they metaphorical rats. :?

"rats live on no evil star"

thanks for the puzzlement

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Post by WIREMAN » May 17th, 2006, 7:14 pm

pesky creatures
folks round here
put moth balls under
the hood to keep
'em away...........
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Post by Arcadia » May 17th, 2006, 8:11 pm

to believe or not to believe
r/a/t/s not cats
the ones that leave traces everywhere
the ones that let you sleep until 10 am
in the middle of the week
because desinfection day

(auch, maybe we'll find some cadaveres tomorrow...)

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