Homogeny
Creamed
but the best part of me
hardly drew a glare
unnoticed - almost worse -
If I take a line a simple line a hand drawn line and go on sail on without a
break or space will it eventually lead
to you?
but who then
will dot my i
cross my t
Homogeny thirsts
for the new way
the new line
the new game
not the tired line the tried and true line
Homogeny thirsts
pucker up
drink
cold
thirst
Homogeny
Homogeny
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse
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Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse
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I have a scientific regard for the nothingness of being me
I studied diligently the
arrogant course someone
set for me
compounded it
immaculated it
If I speak
in the riddle of a rhyme
set worlds on end
for the cost of time
I am no better
than I thought I'd be
Hypocrite
Gasper at insult
Eater of lines
I studied diligently the
arrogant course someone
set for me
compounded it
immaculated it
If I speak
in the riddle of a rhyme
set worlds on end
for the cost of time
I am no better
than I thought I'd be
Hypocrite
Gasper at insult
Eater of lines
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse
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Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse
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I am an eater of lines too, and I ate yours right up. Creamed---I loved that opening because it can mean different things. I hope you got your I's dotted and it was ecstacy. great poem my friend so quit nibbling that creamy cheese and write some more, lmao. "C"
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creamed as if a lose in a game. the best part going unnoticed. If I were to change would you notice me then. Just thoughts on the first part. Now the second part The first part of it seemed to be a study in how to get someone to notice (I'm taking into context the first post) and finding it is not working. No matter what I do nothing works. Or is it that I am being untrue to myself and therefore am a hypocrite. Just thoughts.
love lots
love lots
Great poetry yourself, iblieve:iblieve wrote:Creamed---I loved that opening because it can mean different things. I hope you got your I's dotted and it was ecstacy.
Creamed--
I love that
opening
be
cause it can
mean
different
things. I hope you got your
[eyes] crossed
tease dotted
and it was exstacy.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw
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