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Thank You

Posted: May 18th, 2006, 9:26 pm
by beth_sweety13
I want to thank you for all that you've done.
For breaking my heart, because you were my number one.
You taught me to move on.
And not to look back on,
All the times that we've had.
And when something made me mad.
You held me close and told me it was okay.
That life could sometimes be that way.
But somewhere along the line, we drifted apart.
And somehow, I knew it wouldn't last from the start.
But it's okay now, and we're both just fine.
I've finnally come to the end of the line.
I was just another one of your toys.
Which is pretty typical for you little boys.
I got over you just in time.
And now my heart is all mine.

Re: Thank You

Posted: May 18th, 2006, 9:28 pm
by joel
beth_sweety13 wrote: All the times that we've have.
And when something made me mad.
Have or had? I think the "have" is a nice twist...but don't know fo' sho.

Posted: May 19th, 2006, 4:15 pm
by Ann Bingham
O.k. so maybe this was the first. I like that the muse in this piece is strong in that he/she moved on. You go girl.


love lots
Deb.