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I hate Jesus
Posted: July 7th, 2006, 3:37 am
by mnaz
(Door prize.... one bazillionth piece of writing in re: Jesus)...
I hate Jesus.
I hate the Dalai Lama.
I hate Buddha-fried tomes,
and soft breeze pomes.
I hate Mother Theresa.
I hate Mother Time.
I hate your sit-ins,
flowers, acid,
and rhymes.
I hate selfless love.
I hate Gandhi.
I hate the white doves
and their spotless laundry.
I hate sounds of peace,
I hate its teachers.
I hate their release,
and quiet creatures....
Soft on crime,
all of them.
Posted: July 7th, 2006, 6:14 am
by stilltrucking
Nobodies perfect
Not even George W Bush
I only wish I was man enough to make your list too. Good company to be in.
Posted: July 7th, 2006, 9:36 am
by mousey1
I hate lies
and baby-doll eyes...staring
I hate the lines
of every poem written
soft with love
putrid with smitten
oozing somebody's regret
I hate
but I'd rather love
(I love Jesus...hate hate...and love your poem...a tome to frustration...damn that God damned frustration...may it rot in someone else's brain and leave mine and mine alone.)
WHAT A FUCKING GREAT POEM!!!!
Posted: July 7th, 2006, 4:22 pm
by mtmynd
puked up a good one here, mnaz!
nothing like aspirations gone bad.
Posted: July 7th, 2006, 4:56 pm
by Doreen Peri
Posted: July 7th, 2006, 7:42 pm
by WIREMAN
....a gem mr. naz......made me think of lord buckley for some reason....
it sure would be a good performance piece......
Posted: July 8th, 2006, 12:05 am
by Ann Bingham
I'm speachless. The last two lines, and I'm KO'd. Oy!
Yes I liked it in other words.
Posted: July 8th, 2006, 3:28 am
by mnaz
you know, the thing I hate most is that 'turn the other cheek' stuff.
Soft.... way too Soft!
Posted: July 8th, 2006, 8:27 am
by ~K
turning the other cheek
gets you bitch slapped
I fucking hate that
Posted: July 8th, 2006, 10:01 am
by stilltrucking
Nice work mnaz
anything else you hate?
How about experience?
"Who has time enough for experience?"
Are you speaking from experience ~K?
Posted: July 8th, 2006, 10:02 am
by ~K
"You could always kill them first before they get a chance to slap you. Kind of a preemptive anti slap move."
~st
I LOVE that!
Mortal Combat's got nothing on you.
Posted: July 8th, 2006, 10:10 am
by mousey1
Ah soft,
now soft is sweet
and who here wouldn't turn the other cheek
for a kiss, a caress
a soft peck a smooth glide a nuzzling of neck
a hand, gentle hand, soft hand on the breast
well you know the rest
you get fucked over
too soft
I say it's too hard
much too hard
shall we find the gentle in between
Posted: July 9th, 2006, 4:12 am
by mnaz
ideally, yes.
Posted: July 9th, 2006, 6:10 am
by Dave The Dov
Look you get fucked over you get fucked over. But I would never slap my way back to feeling better again!!!! But it's good to get the rage out in a way that doesn't put more hurt out there on those who hurt you.
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Posted: July 10th, 2006, 3:38 pm
by joel
i was waiting for a powerful ending. the ending i got was weak--weak and profound. awesome write. i hate weakness; but then there are those who say power is made perfect in weakness.