should i let him open another

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YABYUM
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should i let him open another

Post by YABYUM » August 2nd, 2006, 4:35 am

little by mental
choose and, and exists
end that heart it's not a gift, flesh vessels all get 1 ride
have you stared into that.......
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Post by stilltrucking » August 4th, 2006, 12:29 pm

stared into her for a million miles
a river of lights from ocean to ocean
when I lost my ride I thought I lost my life
they say where you look is telling

I still got plenty to lose.

I appreciate the opening ronnie.

Sorry I forgot your name
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short and sweet
I like your post a lot.

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Re: should i let him open another

Post by lenny » August 5th, 2006, 4:19 am

YABYUM wrote:little by mental
choose and, and exists
end that heart it's not a gift,

flesh vessels all get 1 ride
have you stared into that.......
##Specific flesh vessels, yes. But not the captains of those vessels, who will command many ships before arriving at the final Port of Call. That is more worth staring into.

Be well,

lenny
None of us ever gets anything we don't either need or deserve. Dry those liquid emotions and move on.

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