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e_dog
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Post by e_dog » August 11th, 2006, 2:32 am

so this is what it's like
on the other side.

no pain. no
pleasure.
only the horrible
solitude
of nothing.

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mnaz
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Post by mnaz » August 12th, 2006, 6:23 pm

i looked around.

there's something to be said for 'nothing'.

(to re-state the obvious).

what will balance a billion-and-one

over-thought, over-wrought, over-fought somethings?

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stilltrucking
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Post by stilltrucking » August 12th, 2006, 8:28 pm

there it is
boredom
I'll worry about it when I get there.


really nice work e-dog
a real kick in the ass.
gracias

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~K
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Post by ~K » August 31st, 2006, 10:56 am

nothing
wrecks me
in the grip
of friendly
disaster

the end all
resets

& I miss
my chance
again

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