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It was one of those nights
Posted: August 25th, 2006, 1:14 am
by e_dog
It was one of those nights
where he had no one to fight.
So, he fought himself.
Round after round
he kicked the shit out of himself.
Sometimes he fell
but always got up before the count
ended. He lasted to the end,
hopeful,
confident, even.
And lost on the scoring.
Posted: September 30th, 2006, 8:12 pm
by joel
i know this loser! i swear!
Posted: September 30th, 2006, 8:18 pm
by stilltrucking
sorry about the edit ~k
I swore I would never edit a post again after someone replied to it.
But I am in a pit these days
Never thought I would be here again
Either
IT was either this or cut my ear off.
It is good that you are not interested
Why should you be?
It would be like looky loo's at a car wreck.
Posted: October 1st, 2006, 12:20 pm
by ~K
if I could cry
liquid would
not be an issue
worth exploring
but you are
reinventing
rain even
as we speak
you are
pretending
not to feel
the drops
of pain
that fall
despite my
lack of
intrest
Posted: October 3rd, 2006, 1:26 am
by mnaz
I'm livin' it.
Posted: October 3rd, 2006, 4:58 pm
by stilltrucking
it takes one small step
a quantum leap
but I tripped
now look at the hole I am in
Posted: October 3rd, 2006, 5:53 pm
by stilltrucking
Sorry e-dog I have wandered rambled and babbled all over your poem.
Just a coincidence what you wrote juxtaposed against a sad crazy scene I witnessed.
More than witnessed participated in. Contributed my own insanity. Just a family wreckage, don't mean nothing, move on, move on, shows over.