angular crossing or geometrical law

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mindbum
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angular crossing or geometrical law

Post by mindbum » October 28th, 2006, 2:02 pm

out from the cellarstorm
of tunnels
the clatter climbs the grade.

the sun sets.

worn blue sky behind
darker clouds
with vast colored highlights.
pink & orange & silvers
of celestial fire.

clouds cut shadows
sharp as solid objects.

from a height
what's left of the day
is divided
between an anachronistic glow
& shadow of coming night.
godless & songless, western man dances with the stuffed gorilla through all the blind alleys of a dead-end world.

-maxwell bodenheim

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Post by mousey1 » October 28th, 2006, 2:39 pm

lovely
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by mindbum » October 29th, 2006, 2:33 pm

merci mousey
godless & songless, western man dances with the stuffed gorilla through all the blind alleys of a dead-end world.

-maxwell bodenheim

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