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Poetry, etc.

Posted: November 25th, 2006, 7:51 pm
by mnaz
Jesus never wrote poetry; he dictated it.
If you move at the speed of my TV for too long,
there's bound to be a problem.
Only now can I begin to understand the metaphor
of love and hangover, love of hangover,
of spry metaphors of how free i was
in a silky sheen of a swamp,
only now, just now.

It's not easy to write poetry
For one thing, most of it gets me to writin' more,
and I can't be seen with such a discredited pastime.
Now is not the time.
And the freeways go south,
South of north.

Posted: November 26th, 2006, 7:32 am
by Dave The Dov
Charles Bukowski noooo more like you instead!!!! Loved it!!!! :D
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Posted: November 26th, 2006, 11:05 pm
by mnaz
thanks Dave.

poetics are a funny thing, they are....

methinks I need a break....

Posted: November 27th, 2006, 3:50 pm
by hester_prynne
Discredited pastime?
Methinks not in your case Mnaz......

Rave on,
Drive on.

Never stop writing.....
H 8)

Posted: November 28th, 2006, 7:48 pm
by WIREMAN
....right this very night I watch my poetry turn into song...the word set loose to wander thru a field of sounds......this is great mind writing mark....