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Poetry manuscript

Posted: December 20th, 2006, 2:18 pm
by Doreen Peri
I edited my poetry manuscript.
I deleted all of the worthless lines.
If you'd like to read it, here it is.

Posted: December 20th, 2006, 2:44 pm
by stilltrucking
My epoch novel.

Posted: December 21st, 2006, 11:42 am
by Totenkopf
I find it rather ____________; and the sections following ____________ are especially ________________. The lines _____________, which seem to indicate a sensation of _________________ perhaps allude to _____________ and the related __________________ of ___________. All in all, the poem is ____________________.

Posted: February 8th, 2007, 2:20 pm
by mnaz
You need a new editor..