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~K
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symbiot

Post by ~K » February 11th, 2007, 11:00 am

symbiot

by trip on March 12, 2004 23:06:00

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took you
in
my mouth
hours upon hours
I was on top
you slid down
to my level
it's your level
now
cannot do without
a tongue
to pierce hallucinations
trailing semiconscious
stealing seconds
I'm yours
now
we can do without
the cure
but not the sickness

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4 you...

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joel
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Re: symbiot

Post by joel » February 11th, 2007, 11:28 am

~K wrote:took you
in
my mouth

a tongue
to pierce hallucinations
Talk the visions.
Discuss the pictures.
Spell the words on equal levels.
Steer the conversation.
Word the wonder.
Whisper possibilities.
Speak potentialities.
Script the spontaneity.
Tongue the hallucinations.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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muted
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Post by muted » February 12th, 2007, 1:50 am

symbiosis
`````````

Diagnosis

desperation

interpretation

....i am...

more than

this disease

entitles me to be.....


see past
the past


see me

please

spare me
this leprosy

the wasting away
of my heartstrings.............

binding
us

I love You
and that
is more than
enough

to save us.

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tinkerjack
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Post by tinkerjack » February 14th, 2007, 4:01 pm

Parasitism
At one extreme of the symbiotic scale is parasitism, where one partner (the parasite) benefits from the relationship and the other partner (the host) is damaged. A tapeworm is a parasite; you may be its host. E. coli bacteria can be parasites if they get into your gut. Viruses are parasites, though they are only sort of alive.
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Spiderwoman by trip 1974
The year I ran away to join the circus at the tender age of 33.

I might as well been coupling with a black widow spider. Because spider woman was never really a presence for me. Just another solipsized vagina and beautiful face. What did she ever do to deserve a wretch like me? Me blissed out, she off the pill for a couple months to let her body detox, what the hell was in those things back in the old days? Me so blissed out I forgot to hold onto my Galoshes. I always loved the library in Brautigan's novel The Abortion, A Historical Romance. The little old lady bringing in a book she wrote in crayons.


Ah well my friend
you tell me redemption is a given
I hope so cause there may not be a cure for me
I am a disease called man.

Even so
Life is so beautiful
And it is sweet to draw another breath



The Magician of Lublin got nothing on me

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