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An air of sensible naïveté

Posted: March 1st, 2007, 6:29 pm
by joel
An air of sensible naïveté
was all— and all much more than sums within
equation cases’ echo: truth off proof
off truth again. Too juvenile is fact
at moments— not untrue, not adequate—
maturity surpasses what is rich
by common measure. Should I pray, my voice
engaged, who gauges true intent? What choice
transcends words’ weak and feeble symbols which
I claim for deep confessions? Ought I quit
my words and love you but naïvely? Act
surprised when on an air of love aloof
my love so common airs like genius in
a plastic bottleful of Jean Naté.

Posted: March 6th, 2007, 4:22 am
by hester_prynne
Your passion speaks beyond these wonderful words Joel....
Enjoyed this read very much....
H 8)

Posted: March 7th, 2007, 1:58 am
by joel
aw, thanks H. glad you like it...despite having dragged in the Nate. :wink: