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Der Prozess
Posted: April 12th, 2007, 1:08 pm
by Susan Marie
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i feel like Jesus
days before his
breakdown
slipslide
paydirt
bedrock
nailbed distillation
olive trees birthed
relics of tulips, burlesque
lilting heads
while the twelve slept
a jury mast
no thought
speech
sound
interminable
a vociferous silence
of one heart beating
met with distorted
choleric
indifference
it is this quest i detest
on muddied knees
yet beg of you, Gethsamane
absolute reincarnation to appease
immaculate
anxiety
i stumble with you
palms to Earth
head first
towards evanescence
Posted: April 12th, 2007, 1:29 pm
by Doreen Peri
I love it! I want to hear it! I just read it aloud and as with most all of your work, it's music! Fine work!
WELCOME!
Ms. Poet... I am most honored you have graced us with your presence!
Hope you enjoy it here as much as we'll enjoy having you!
Posted: April 12th, 2007, 5:10 pm
by Susan Marie
Thanks Dor!
I feel like I can breathe in here!
You wanna hear it - trust me, you know me, I will have spoken word in here.
There is so much in here, I have to go through everything!
A great room . . . excellent topics. I love it.
I am honored to be here, finally.
Re: Der Prozess
Posted: April 12th, 2007, 7:10 pm
by joel
Susan Marie wrote:
i feel like Jesus
days before his
breakdown
slipslide
paydirt
bedrock
nailbed distillation
olive trees birthed
relics of tulips, burlesque
lilting heads
while the twelve slept
a jury mast
no thought
speech
sound
interminable
a vociferous silence
of one heart beating
met with distorted
choleric
indifference
it is this quest i detest
on muddied knees
yet beg of you, Gethsamane
absolute reincarnation to appease
immaculate
anxiety
i stumble with you
palms to Earth
head first
towards evanescence
i wanted to quote the parts i wanted to read again. awesome.
Posted: April 12th, 2007, 8:11 pm
by Susan Marie
Thank you Joel, I have so much reading to do , I just got here
Gosh you are making me blush quoting the entire thing!
*smile*