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Like honeysuckle

Posted: April 26th, 2007, 5:41 pm
by joel
Like honeysuckle on a bark-brown post—
like gently scented yellows from the mud—
like rings of fireflies on dusky clouds
as tawny Fledermäuse hunt their stars,
I watch her seven golden bangles ooze
like honey on her top-soil paper wrist—
her good earth: soft and dark, with grit
and strength, with mold and worms, with blood and spit—
all unashamed and beautiful: a tryst
as fleeting on her arm as if tattoos
imprinted it forever for as far
as I concern myself. My love confounds
that clustered soft forsythia, that flood
of ginger blooms, in hope to branch its host.

Posted: April 27th, 2007, 5:40 pm
by Perdida
niiiice, real nice.

i've read several of yours Joel and so far this is my fav.

love how you describe both sides, rough and soft.

I watch her seven golden bangles ooze
like honey on her top-soil paper wrist—


love the visual of this.



:D

Posted: April 27th, 2007, 5:44 pm
by WIREMAN
sounds like my kinda girl joel......really good write my friend....

Posted: April 28th, 2007, 12:56 pm
by joel
kind words--my thanks to you both

Posted: April 29th, 2007, 11:33 am
by inkedgoddess
i dig it
it got soulllllllllllllllllllllllllll

and i like it like that