Sunday Stream (138) ~ colorfall

[mtmynd]

~colorfall~

black/white

black/white

white white white

black

(((((red)))))

black/white

black/white/black/white

white

black black

white white

black/white

(((((red)))))

black/white
black/white
black/white


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cecil
16 sept 2007

note: last night i was washed under by excess - ale and smoke. this morning i'm paying for the good times. mynd minimalist, i searched thru back writings... isn't there something minimum here? i found this piece. i read this piece. i post this piece. minimum effort. the colors fall... catch them if you can. ty

[judih]

love this piece
one of the best sunday pick-me-ups/downs to cross this mind
thank you
perfect
sigh

[mnaz]

like a newspaper... black and white and read all over...

like my head this morning... black/white smudged into eternal gray... and red tinged eyes...

("celebrated" a wee bit too much last nite)....

I shouldn't do that... I end up leaving discreet (discrete?) little time bombs over on the other website... I guess a poet I shall never quite be...

[WIREMAN]

the world is a
carousel of colors.......sunday night rememberances spawned by this
flash poem

[Arcadia]

I love it!!
today is a mostly furious green-grey day here. Heavy rain near spring in the city.

thanks for the stream, Cecil!!!
saludos,

Arcadia

[mtmynd]

Judih, mnaz, wired and Arcadia... to all of you a big Thanks! I'm both pleased and surprised at the response to this piece! hah!