A-Death's Story of Jack Sr. and son....
Posted: March 8th, 2005, 11:35 am
I just re-read chapter one and now chapter two.
The descriptive ability you project is quite qlear. I can visualise everything.
You know my first response a couple weeks ago, I was drunk and stoned....and tried to be spontaneously expressive in a non-structured way, free flow stream of consciousness and I guess I ldleft a confuzed impression.
Today I am drinking coffee, hear the wind blowing thru open windows, temp about 50 degreez. New age music. Stoned.
I see a depth here. The initial shock of the beating really braced me the first time.
An can ya believe it, the old man callz his son on his honeymoon.
The descriptive ability you project is quite qlear. I can visualise everything.
You know my first response a couple weeks ago, I was drunk and stoned....and tried to be spontaneously expressive in a non-structured way, free flow stream of consciousness and I guess I ldleft a confuzed impression.
Today I am drinking coffee, hear the wind blowing thru open windows, temp about 50 degreez. New age music. Stoned.
I see a depth here. The initial shock of the beating really braced me the first time.
An can ya believe it, the old man callz his son on his honeymoon.