Yes, 2023?

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Re: Yes, 2023?

Post by judih » January 17th, 2023, 11:05 pm

from the wheatfields
the sound of a frog
and one lone jackal

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Re: Yes, 2023?

Post by judih » January 18th, 2023, 10:54 pm

her face
admiration and love
fly the distance

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Re: Yes, 2023?

Post by saw » January 19th, 2023, 10:54 am

can't find the old me
I sort of remember him
the new me is fine
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Yes, 2023?

Post by sasha » January 19th, 2023, 2:22 pm

her path and mine
met at the confluence
of two rivers

we fell in love
and together did we
travel downstream

but when she left
my journey could not
proceed from there

but only
from
the confluence...
.
"Falsehood flies, the Truth comes limping after it." - Jonathan Swift, ca. 1710

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Re: Yes, 2023?

Post by stilltrucking » January 19th, 2023, 4:02 pm

remembering myself in text boxes
human ChatGPT™
if not for haiku dust in the wind

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Re: Yes, 2023?

Post by judih » January 19th, 2023, 10:58 pm

how to unwrite words
erase hurtful actions
ongoing research

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Re: Yes, 2023?

Post by judih » January 20th, 2023, 11:19 pm

overflowing smiles
heart full of little songs
granddaughter visit

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Re: Yes, 2023?

Post by judih » January 21st, 2023, 11:04 pm

4:07
four oh seven
my morning begins
each second brand new

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Re: Yes, 2023?

Post by saw » January 22nd, 2023, 11:08 am

surprising new drug
does odd things unfamiliar with
adaptable me
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Yes, 2023?

Post by judih » January 22nd, 2023, 11:00 pm

back to past
a new look at strange doings
fresh understanding

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Re: Yes, 2023?

Post by judih » January 23rd, 2023, 10:58 pm

fingers on keys
piano chords respond
synapses refresh

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Re: Yes, 2023?

Post by stilltrucking » January 24th, 2023, 7:37 pm

keyboard understands fingers
"Before he part
Let Jack catch fire."—“Tinker Jack and the Tidy Wives”

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Re: Yes, 2023?

Post by judih » January 24th, 2023, 10:56 pm

at this moment
mind willing and able
to be present

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Re: Yes, 2023?

Post by saw » January 25th, 2023, 11:44 am

difficult to move
sometimes I sit poised to stand
but I need more time
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Yes, 2023?

Post by judih » January 25th, 2023, 10:49 pm

remember that dream
those brilliant insights
or hope for rerun

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