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Post by stilltrucking » August 9th, 2005, 11:02 am

if u want a thing done wrong
u got to do it
for yourself alone

--------fini?

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Post by jimboloco » August 9th, 2005, 11:24 am

self reflecting mirror
face to face
look away
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by tinkerjack » August 9th, 2005, 11:31 am

too late
after image
burned on retina

have a slice of PI
personal note 9:13
my mother told me never to stare into the sun
too bad
I listend to her

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Post by tinkerjack » November 16th, 2005, 2:48 pm

Love is all there is
Invisible as the wind
That propels my life


claustrophobia
motorcycle therapy
chase my fears away

sunny
cool day
life is beautiful
free rice
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I used to be smart

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Post by joel » November 17th, 2005, 4:51 pm

internal atomic movement
at the heart of petrologic captivity
boulder rockslide freedom

heart cannot stop and live
and cannot walk away from carnal life
but wanders with what it allows
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Post by jimboloco » November 18th, 2005, 3:00 am

ah the mudslime
it pours down
hope is lost
things fall apart
so what?
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by tinkerjack » November 18th, 2005, 6:33 am

ah the mudslime
it pours down
hope is lost
things fall apart
so what?





life goes on today
at dawn of consciousness
my hope is reborn

nothing else matters
we are children of sunlight
love makes the world go round
























































































































































I just can't make them work, a dark night jimboloco, a dark night for my sister.
trying to get her a job, she just has no confidence in herself. I have no idea what this thing called marriage is, the give and take the flow of power between husband and wife. The Bear wears her down and she bites back, but somehow there is love between them, but she just can't be a polyester bride no more. He has a brain tumor, can't work construction any more. Feels emasculated I think. But he has a shop full of tools and a lot of skills, a fine cabnet maker too, but he is so sunk in despair over money. sorry SooZen this ain't got nothing to do with haiku.
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Post by jimboloco » November 18th, 2005, 10:12 am

i like it, i take it the Bear is your bro-in-law.

poetic license.
how we cope in this life
especially in this f______ country
at this time

we'll all be yelling
hooray for hillary
in a couple more years

why don't you edit your post and delete the massive blank space
i mean you could leave some
but
it is almost forbidding
foreboding
a great chasm
i mean that is way detached, man
like i get the feel of it all
spaced,
but the Bear is almost in despair

is he in pain?
if so, then he should seek relief and
a shrink for some legal dope
like my budeprofin
a smooth time release mellow speed
cortico steroidzzzzz get it on
and a little weed
and slender coffeeeee
life goes on today
at dawn of consciousness
my hope is reborn

nothing else matters
we are children of sunlight
love makes the world go round

back to haiku
hanshan burned the sutras
they laughed their asses off, man
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[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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