Surreal-ku

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e_dog
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Post by e_dog » March 7th, 2007, 4:58 am

(after Kerouac, with apologies)

Your pussy
was wet
from walking in the rain.
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Post by stilltrucking » March 7th, 2007, 10:39 am

I liked it but I don't get the allusion to Kerouac.



Clear skies and sunshine
Hiroshima walkers
Now shadows

a surreal peanut ku
you just can't eat one
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Post by e_dog » March 7th, 2007, 7:05 pm

he wrote a -ku something like:

the soles of my shoes
are wet
from walking in the rain.
I don't think 'Therefore, I am.' Therefore, I am.
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Post by stilltrucking » March 8th, 2007, 1:26 am

Kerouac
breaks my heart
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