Haiku Onto e e cummings

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Haiku Onto e e cummings

Post by Dave The Dov » September 3rd, 2007, 4:14 am

Today is the 45th anniversary of his passing. This haiku is my tribute to him. The haiku is based on the last thing that he did right before he died.


chopped wood

went upstairs

died upon entering immortality



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Post by joel » September 4th, 2007, 4:59 pm

small and unnoticed
a dot of fly's buzz is heard
passed unseen but known
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Post by Doreen Peri » September 4th, 2007, 5:22 pm

i like it!

please see your private messages... someone is using your email address, Dave... looks like they've stolen your address book. ugh...

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