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Post by westcoast » March 18th, 2008, 9:42 pm

Liquid origami
bending snowflakes
with my tongue

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Post by sooZen » March 18th, 2008, 11:50 pm

she's hai!
flipping words
acrobatic kuku

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muddy puddle
a toe jamboree
for painted ladies

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rusty haiku
finger tapping good
haijinks!
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Post by WIREMAN » March 19th, 2008, 8:51 pm

bent scissor rust
they came vast distances
enabled by the wind
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Post by sooZen » March 19th, 2008, 10:35 pm

Liquid origami
bending snowflakes
with my tongue
westcoast...that haiku has been on my lips all day playing in loops in my head. A beautiful seneru. Was this recently composed? the reason I ask is the snow reference...whatever, I swallowed it whole!
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Post by westcoast » March 19th, 2008, 10:39 pm

thank u! yes, i wrote it a couple of months ago. we don't get much snow here except a dump in jan or feb depending. it stays a few days and is done.

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Post by westcoast » March 19th, 2008, 11:30 pm

awesome mark :)

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