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Post by gypsyjoker » May 4th, 2008, 11:29 pm

woman in her summer dress
in the sunshine of her love
I will live
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Post by Doreen Peri » May 4th, 2008, 11:31 pm

that's beautiful, jack!

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Post by gypsyjoker » May 4th, 2008, 11:40 pm

Thank you
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Post by jweeble » May 4th, 2008, 11:59 pm

I agree. Very vivid image and feel to this.
immeasurable...illogical...infinity squared

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