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Re: oops october ku

Posted: October 12th, 2013, 9:39 am
by the mingo
ear caves
open to gather
and echo

Re: oops october ku

Posted: October 12th, 2013, 10:40 pm
by judih
raw throat
not from screaming
but from silence

Re: oops october ku

Posted: October 13th, 2013, 7:56 am
by the mingo
Hah! That one got me smilin' this morning, judih - got my coffee smilin' too 8)

Re: oops october ku

Posted: October 13th, 2013, 1:26 pm
by judih
the mingo wrote:Hah! That one got me smilin' this morning, judih - got my coffee smilin' too 8)
great!
finally i get to hand you a smile after getting so many smiles from your words

Re: oops october ku

Posted: October 13th, 2013, 10:45 pm
by judih
pickpockets and thieves
steal my dreamtime
vanish with the loot

Re: oops october ku

Posted: October 13th, 2013, 11:07 pm
by the mingo
you've handed me many smiles, delights, & emotive moments too - 8)

Re: oops october ku

Posted: October 14th, 2013, 8:33 pm
by the mingo
names on stone
a bridge to carry the path
across the river

Re: oops october ku

Posted: October 14th, 2013, 10:20 pm
by judih
sneak away
slithering tail
a coward's exit



edit: this was not in response to yours, the mingo....
but it makes for an interesting sequence

Re: oops october ku

Posted: October 15th, 2013, 1:34 am
by the mingo
yes 8)

Re: oops october ku

Posted: October 15th, 2013, 1:40 am
by the mingo
the train pulls away
from the station platform
rain has blackened everything

Re: oops october ku

Posted: October 15th, 2013, 11:00 pm
by judih
wave of shivers
dream infiltration
surrender to dawn

Re: oops october ku

Posted: October 16th, 2013, 12:50 am
by the mingo
past midnight
quiet moment
everything is let go

Re: oops october ku

Posted: October 16th, 2013, 10:45 pm
by judih
smiling young faces
melt in frenzy of hate
one lone objector

Re: oops october ku

Posted: October 18th, 2013, 9:51 am
by judih
small terrors
yet I climb from bed
blatant bravery

Re: oops october ku

Posted: October 18th, 2013, 9:58 am
by the mingo
crows flock & pass overhead
i began to count them
then changed my mind