fragile X

Clarity.
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Rose
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fragile X

Post by Rose » July 15th, 2007, 8:25 pm

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afternoon sunshine
butterflies smell with their feet
honeysuckle sighs
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Post by stilltrucking » July 16th, 2007, 3:19 pm

Your haiku
brought me close to tears.

so fragile so beautiful
thank you
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Post by Artguy » July 16th, 2007, 7:24 pm

afternoon clouds
no bees to be seen
scent of rain
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thank you!

Post by Rose » July 16th, 2007, 10:39 pm

stilltrucking -- thank you!
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lovely

Post by Rose » July 16th, 2007, 10:41 pm

Artguy - a true moment captured :)
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Post by WIREMAN » July 17th, 2007, 7:55 pm

wings of the moth
give me strength

belly of the butterfly
allows me to love

beautiful haiku Rose......lyrics to a track from my CD above.....
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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