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another thing
Posted: March 21st, 2008, 2:59 am
by diesel dyke
inside the skin
where suffering meets desire
women can't
get zen
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Posted: March 21st, 2008, 11:49 am
by westcoast
if you need to "get it"
you aint' got "it"
forget it
PS - you look awfully..um...hairy...for a dyke.
Posted: March 21st, 2008, 2:19 pm
by stilltrucking
sharp in take of breath when I wrote it I thought wow I just wrote a haiku maybe
now i have my doubts for one thing the first line is only four sylables And I question other things about it too
. The hypertext link for get that was an afterthough not a part of the spontaniety something I did in an edit after I posted. Something I remembered from a Women's Zen center
the same with meet/meat maybe me pandering to women again.
Not sure about the verbs either suffering
But just came out in flash it was fun
I though by golly I may have finally written a ku,
or was it something for the inside of a fortune cookie.
thanks for taking the time to reply
sincerely
jt
Posted: March 21st, 2008, 2:28 pm
by stilltrucking
now that i think about it was the women's zen center article about women not getting enlightenment that inspired the ku
and the title
another thing of course was inspired by you
as always
thank you for you inspiration
perspiration and willful art
RE
PS - you look awfully..um...hairy...for a dyke.
this avatar is what I look like when I shave
I grew the beard to get the boys leave me alone.
Posted: March 21st, 2008, 4:44 pm
by westcoast
it's all YOU?
wrapped around
a kuku -
whooo,
who knew!!
____________
LOL...omg, it's another manifestation of you. We really can't believe our eyes, ears or beards!
~westcoast
Posted: March 21st, 2008, 4:45 pm
by westcoast
another
nothing
thing..
haiku really doesn't have to conform to anything. that's all bull kuku. if you read up on the topic in english translations of japanese text you'll learn that anything goes... wheeee!!
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Posted: March 21st, 2008, 4:50 pm
by stilltrucking
that's why women can't get enlightened.
