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skipping stones - kinda tanka

Posted: May 1st, 2008, 12:09 am
by jweeble
rings skimming surface
intersecting moving on
infinite travels
perpetual connections
effects forever unknown

glancing encounters
looks, words serendipitous
unseen, unnoticed
spread as ripples on water
changing lives, decisions, me

Posted: May 1st, 2008, 12:12 am
by westcoast
very nice thoughts jw :)

Posted: May 1st, 2008, 12:19 am
by jweeble
ty - sometimes when the mind is flying off in all directions, the simplicity of this format helps pull all together...

Posted: May 4th, 2008, 12:45 pm
by jimboloco
five line haiku
what ya gonna do :?:
sunday morning buzzed :o

rings skimming surface
spread as ripples on water
glancing encounters