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Post by emel.scott » June 17th, 2008, 5:24 pm

virtuosity without soul
extremely well dug
empty hole
We should not mind if on our ear there fell. Some less of cunning, more of oracle...Thoreau

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Post by stilltrucking » July 4th, 2008, 12:13 am

virtuosity with out soul
abortions of originality

I liked this one
I think it is senyru
but don't let me encourage you scott
I am an ignorant child about Zen.

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