haiku waves... splash!

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haiku waves... splash!

Post by mtmynd » June 11th, 2009, 12:09 pm

fuck five-seven-five
i can't take it anymore
besides who's counting?
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Post by sooZen » September 23rd, 2009, 7:59 am

someone
someone out there
someone counts

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how do I love you?
let me count the ways today
oh! infinity

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counting toes
counting crows
count dracula

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count it out
five and seven and five
Issa that right?

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ahem
excuse me
i lost count
Freedom's just another word...



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Post by mtmynd » September 23rd, 2009, 8:05 am

all this counting
taking a pulse
whose winning
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Post by sooZen » September 29th, 2009, 8:01 am

whose winning?
who is losing?
all in all

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one, two
buckle my shoe
rhyme on!

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i lost count
start again!
i lost count
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Post by Artguy » September 29th, 2009, 10:29 am

Pop goes the haiku
unrhyming no timing aaak
tooo many words

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Post by Artguy » September 29th, 2009, 4:13 pm

Oh brevity
How short you are
How long the day

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Post by Doreen Peri » October 5th, 2009, 12:17 pm

asleep at the wheel of the ship
navigation by lucid dreaming
catch the wave

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Post by jimboloco » October 6th, 2009, 10:47 pm

keep moving forward
the revolution is happening
flower powered steamers
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by SadLuckDame » October 6th, 2009, 11:01 pm

Oh! Luna Darling.
They'll shoot you up tomorrow.
Don't let them eat heart.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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Post by the mingo » October 7th, 2009, 7:31 am

Well, fuck.
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by sooZen » October 7th, 2009, 9:17 am

or fuck well...

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Post by the flaming ace » October 7th, 2009, 11:27 am

it don't mean nothing
nickels and dimes
afterburners!
[b][color=darkgreen]one more for th road[/color][/b] :mrgreen:

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