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haiku #1

Posted: October 24th, 2010, 9:16 pm
by happytrails
hate is like a boil
hiding pain, till it erupts
and spreads its poison

Re: haiku #1

Posted: October 24th, 2010, 11:14 pm
by Doreen Peri
ain't it the truth? a fine piece, happy!

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festered erupted
hatred spews poison venom
spreads deadly virus

Re: haiku #1

Posted: October 25th, 2010, 7:04 am
by happytrails
Good one, Doreen, thanks.