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Hai Lights
Posted: February 14th, 2005, 8:24 am
by sooZen
train whistle
far away
familiar
...
dog watching
a favorite past time
presently
...
soft snores
he sleeps
I write haiku
or at least...I think I do. Hah!
SooZen
Posted: February 15th, 2005, 9:08 am
by sooZen
Haiku Forensics:
mouse carcass
behind the fridge-
evidence?
...
smell of death
near the cupboard-
criminal assault
...
mouse shit
on the shelf-
mice play
Posted: February 17th, 2005, 10:03 am
by sooZen
well, in the interests of keeping my 'shit' all in one file cabinet....I will continue here.
Please chime in anytime to my string and please try and make it a 'ku' or at least three lines that don't sound like a broken up sentence...Hah! If you can write a one line haiku, low bow from this gal. 5-7-5 is good practice if needed otherwise let her rip. . .
Spring ku
clouds on the horizon
before the sunrise
pink lining
...
old dog
tail in the air
spring!
...
on the fence
two doves snuggle-
a valentine
Posted: February 17th, 2005, 4:51 pm
by jimboloco
ripe persimmons
orange burn
sweet delight
Posted: February 17th, 2005, 4:52 pm
by jimboloco
late winter
early blossoms
ice storm
Posted: February 17th, 2005, 4:53 pm
by jimboloco
sunlight bright on snow
cold day winter
dead swan
Posted: February 18th, 2005, 6:09 am
by sooZen
Lovely Jimbo...I like 'em all
'See' ya next week when I return....
Peace,
SooZen
Posted: February 18th, 2005, 6:52 am
by judih
red mist horizon
buddha bitch bids us adieu
love that woman's song
Posted: February 18th, 2005, 9:29 am
by jimboloco
red mist horizon
buddha bitch bids us adieu
love that woman's song
I gotta stop
amen
like the banner for today
red dawn
over blue bay
oyu get the last word
ok?
Posted: February 18th, 2005, 3:01 pm
by stilltrucking
grandma's garden
morning gloires against brick
a happy child
Posted: February 19th, 2005, 6:41 pm
by jimboloco
BACKYARD BASKETBALL
SUNNY FEBRUARY
FLORIDA AFTERNOON
Posted: February 19th, 2005, 8:15 pm
by stilltrucking
a backyard fishfry
on rainy warm saturday
home sweet home
a day in nature
I escape cacophony
I can hear the wind
_______________________
the bear burns his brush pile
I stare into the flames
looks good no maggots
6+6 + 5=17 ??
Posted: February 20th, 2005, 8:19 am
by jimboloco
fortunes lost
tempest found
waltz anyway
sunday morning
cats look out
birdsongs
another had bear day
daytona 500
jets zoom low
Posted: February 20th, 2005, 11:46 am
by stilltrucking
elephant waltzing
her trunk wrapped around my waist
brown eyes study me
on a unrelated note
last vagina blues
'there's something in a Sunday"
Makes me feel alone
Posted: February 20th, 2005, 5:06 pm
by jimboloco
lazy labia sunday
afternoon snooze
quiet dream