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in winter
Posted: February 9th, 2012, 7:23 pm
by still.trucking
Ghostly voices
cold wind gusts
eerie sound
self criticism
way not anything like a haiku
except for the coincidence of being three lines
I should have called it February Ku
chilled to the bone
The winter of discontent
distracted by abstractions
The Moloch of Abstraction
Re: in winter
Posted: February 15th, 2012, 9:00 pm
by Arcadia
Re: in winter
Posted: February 27th, 2012, 1:32 pm
by stilltrucking
Strange Green February
warm and rain
grass is knee high
thanks for taking the time to comment
something wireman wrote been going round in my thoughts for a couple of days I keep hearing it
wanna be seamless
forever dreamless
something so
centering for me
sounds like a ku maybe
a glimpse of clarity
Re: in winter
Posted: February 28th, 2012, 7:39 am
by SadLuckDame
Everything is going to
eat me up... better
cover February tracks.
Re: in winter
Posted: March 4th, 2012, 12:38 am
by stilltrucking
ashes to Wednesday
Back against the wall
nail a Jew to a tree
Paranoia R me
cover my tracks
step on a crack
Re: in winter
Posted: March 13th, 2012, 8:47 am
by stilltrucking
Everything is going to
eat me up... better
cover February tracks.
woke up from a highly entertaining nightmare this morning and i thought about your ku.
lions and tigers and bears oh my
i have read that children have dreams about being eaten alive, that it is the most frequeunt type of childhood nightmare.
earliest childhood night mare i can remember is one about flying dinosaurs swooping down on me with their big teeth.
a common terror
tip a rari
haiku
