assorted sordid

[balsa]

no key for a rusted lock
on the crawl space door
rats nest warm inside

large drop rings a puddle
her hand between a bottle
of whiskey and pills


seagulls above a parking lot
an abandoned truck
with a bullet hole

spring break
home from the front
without a hand

[sooZen]

Balsa...welcome to haiku and the studio! So glad to see you here and to have your ku's accompany you.

"spring break
home from the front
without a hand"

This one had me puzzled at first. I guess my mind didn't want to go 'there'. Hah!

Again, welcome and I hope to see many more of your excellent haiku.

Peace.
SooZen

[beat_fan]

Your first two have a weird rythym to them. Their fast-moving haiku. Number two didn't catch hold of me really. The third one did, and the second time I read i sort of understood it. It has a good sense of space.
You have a very interesting voice.