Sitting Haiku

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Post by Artguy » March 6th, 2005, 2:38 pm

Sitting
Thoughts flowing out
Sunshine from the window

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Post by jimboloco » March 7th, 2005, 12:16 am

shit kan stanza
sunshine orange
window pane acid
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by jimboloco » March 9th, 2005, 1:59 pm

loafing
soft guitar music
cat's playing

just sitting
no matter
don't know mind
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by judih » March 9th, 2005, 2:17 pm

sitting
worlds swerve silently
my cushion floats

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Post by stilltrucking » March 9th, 2005, 3:04 pm

sitting in sunshine

haiku tree shadows on lawn

thoughtless wordless sight

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Post by jimboloco » March 9th, 2005, 3:55 pm

sitting in gray
haiku relections in water
driveway across the street

would not have seen that
yet looking outside
details of soft cool rain
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by stilltrucking » March 9th, 2005, 4:19 pm

this was the first Haiku I read that went off in my brain like a nuclear camera at Hiroshima.

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shadows
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by abbehill on Jun 27, 2002 11:00 AM

lacy patterned leaves
rhythmic dance on the pavement
brought on by sunlight


___________________________________________
my thoughts were of the above haiku as I was sitting
I wanted to say tree shadows on lawn. but I fudged to make a 17
would not have seen that
before my eyes
bare tree limbs shadowed on grass
not seen till today

fourteen monthos sitting
I never noticed seeing
grassy shadows there
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Post by jimboloco » March 9th, 2005, 4:25 pm

lacy patterned leaves
rhythmic dance on the pavement
brought on by sunlight
i need to start
sitting hara
shadows deepen
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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Post by stilltrucking » March 9th, 2005, 5:17 pm

sitting in shade
tree shadows now parallel
holly shit the sun moved

cat brain mind
startled by the sound
sunshine miracle
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
sitting hara
? dun know, like sitting shiva?, i got to check it out

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Post by jimboloco » March 9th, 2005, 5:26 pm

Image

? dun know, like sitting shiva?, i got to check it out
tantric sex teacher
she will kight
kundalini

yohimbe root and
horney goat weed,
her grace attendinggg

her cushion floaTS above the sargasso sea
with drifting clusters of sea weed and debris
judih, you, an me

she on a cushion floating,
you the seaweed,
and me, the debris,

all three l
ost in the sargasso sea
with the doldrumzzz.

whazzzz uppp??
wherez art guy?
iz he that fly riding and feastinggg on seaweed and debreezz?

fly with bug eyez
he seez all.
walks on wallz az well az water.
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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