yes no-vember ku

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by 68degrees » November 17th, 2014, 9:32 pm

Will there be a noise
if tomorrow never comes
record it for me

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by judih » November 17th, 2014, 11:04 pm

is it time?
now is it?
the answer arrives

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by 68degrees » November 18th, 2014, 9:20 pm

the answer arrives
from a question never asked
lip synched from my love

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by judih » November 18th, 2014, 11:31 pm

why, oh, why
kundalini horoscope
did i read you?

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by 68degrees » November 18th, 2014, 11:43 pm

May I read your palm
ever so pink it blushes
lines worth repeating

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by judih » November 19th, 2014, 11:46 pm

back on track
sleep all night
his shoulder on mine

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by 68degrees » November 20th, 2014, 12:08 pm

When we sleep all night
miss the changing universe
old becomes excuse

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by judih » November 21st, 2014, 12:03 am

endless night
hits wall of cartoon bubbles
each voice persistent

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by the mingo » November 21st, 2014, 12:20 am

in november
maximum sociopaths wander about
married
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by whoaisme » November 21st, 2014, 12:52 am

november when
my mind feels
like brown gravy, ugh!
"From the sudden invasion of a mind not my own in the world. This I will record. For whom? For m y s e l f, beyond denial and beyond indifference." - Philip Lamantia

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by the mingo » November 21st, 2014, 2:37 am

possessive variations
pulsate with
tattered humans attached
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by 68degrees » November 21st, 2014, 11:45 am

November’s closing
winter already in snow
days are dark to dark

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by judih » November 22nd, 2014, 12:08 am

this now
lucky to hear
smiles in voices

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by 68degrees » November 22nd, 2014, 1:04 pm

smiles in voices
few and far between these days
pity the lonely

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by the mingo » November 22nd, 2014, 3:25 pm

life is such a ghastly miracle
& then there's all those
echoing molecules too
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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