yes no-vember ku

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by judih » November 6th, 2014, 12:42 pm

the mingo wrote:bird crashes
into window
gravity wins
ouch / splat

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by judih » November 7th, 2014, 12:00 am

cold toes
black dawning
winter sneaks inside

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by WIREMAN » November 7th, 2014, 6:53 pm

12 hours gone
train rides in between
then back to serene
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by whoaisme » November 7th, 2014, 7:04 pm

every time i see
your face my
fear dwindling
"From the sudden invasion of a mind not my own in the world. This I will record. For whom? For m y s e l f, beyond denial and beyond indifference." - Philip Lamantia

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by judih » November 8th, 2014, 12:50 am

personal reasons
need to say something
thought sculpture

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by the mingo » November 8th, 2014, 10:22 am

personal reasons
need to say something
thought sculpture
o wow - exactly - me too me too!
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by judih » November 8th, 2014, 11:33 pm

so much abstract
till the real speaks out
face-to-face

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by the mingo » November 9th, 2014, 10:47 am

the real speaks
the house creaks
this place this place
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by judih » November 9th, 2014, 11:49 pm

and how delicious
fall back into dreams
story completion

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by whoaisme » November 10th, 2014, 8:38 pm

my dreams
keep waking
me up
"From the sudden invasion of a mind not my own in the world. This I will record. For whom? For m y s e l f, beyond denial and beyond indifference." - Philip Lamantia

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by Arcadia » November 10th, 2014, 8:41 pm

jazmins mixed with tilos
streets paved in blue
october´s gone reminder

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by judih » November 10th, 2014, 10:10 pm

a reason to wake
who can trust clocks
early coffee steam

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by judih » November 12th, 2014, 12:01 am

homework
watch breathing
ignore past future

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by Arcadia » November 12th, 2014, 8:35 pm

homework
watch breathing
ignore past future
:lol: , gracias!

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Re: yes no-vember ku

Post by whoaisme » November 12th, 2014, 8:41 pm

i don't have
anything but
this moment
"From the sudden invasion of a mind not my own in the world. This I will record. For whom? For m y s e l f, beyond denial and beyond indifference." - Philip Lamantia

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