feb 2015 ku

Clarity.
68degrees
Posts: 658
Joined: October 14th, 2014, 7:47 pm

Re: feb 2015 ku

Post by 68degrees » February 23rd, 2015, 3:14 pm

approaching the end
of another lonely month
even snowflakes cry

User avatar
judih
Site Admin
Posts: 13399
Joined: August 17th, 2004, 7:38 am
Location: kibbutz nir oz, israel
Contact:

Re: feb 2015 ku

Post by judih » February 23rd, 2015, 10:53 pm

68degrees wrote:approaching the end
of another lonely month
even snowflakes cry

only birds
sing me lullabies
this lonely night

User avatar
judih
Site Admin
Posts: 13399
Joined: August 17th, 2004, 7:38 am
Location: kibbutz nir oz, israel
Contact:

Re: feb 2015 ku

Post by judih » February 23rd, 2015, 10:53 pm

variations
harmony and drama
no scene a re-run

User avatar
the mingo
Posts: 9708
Joined: June 26th, 2005, 3:51 am
Location: Tug Hill Plateau

Re: feb 2015 ku

Post by the mingo » February 23rd, 2015, 11:20 pm

dark night
below zero
hot dreams
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

User avatar
WIREMAN
Posts: 7576
Joined: August 15th, 2004, 7:52 pm
Location: Frederick, Md.
Contact:

Re: feb 2015 ku

Post by WIREMAN » February 23rd, 2015, 11:28 pm

hot sake dreams
on a cold cold razor night
ronin save that geisha girl
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

User avatar
the mingo
Posts: 9708
Joined: June 26th, 2005, 3:51 am
Location: Tug Hill Plateau

Re: feb 2015 ku

Post by the mingo » February 23rd, 2015, 11:38 pm

'ku should be dripping wet
or hard as stone
no inbetween
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

User avatar
the mingo
Posts: 9708
Joined: June 26th, 2005, 3:51 am
Location: Tug Hill Plateau

Re: feb 2015 ku

Post by the mingo » February 24th, 2015, 12:08 am

in the act of wiping
finger breaks thru toilet paper
o shit
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

User avatar
judih
Site Admin
Posts: 13399
Joined: August 17th, 2004, 7:38 am
Location: kibbutz nir oz, israel
Contact:

Re: feb 2015 ku

Post by judih » February 24th, 2015, 11:34 pm

each passing day
don't wait for miracles
but be ready

User avatar
the mingo
Posts: 9708
Joined: June 26th, 2005, 3:51 am
Location: Tug Hill Plateau

Re: feb 2015 ku

Post by the mingo » February 24th, 2015, 11:48 pm

at the window
i part the blind
still dark outside
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

User avatar
Doreen Peri
Site Admin
Posts: 14539
Joined: July 10th, 2004, 3:30 pm
Location: Virginia
Contact:

Re: feb 2015 ku

Post by Doreen Peri » February 25th, 2015, 5:46 pm

mingo... I found a short form & haiku site. It looks like it has recent posts and is an active forum .... I didn't check out any of the content. Anyway, since you were looking for a spot like that, here's a link ... maybe you'd like to explore it:
http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/forum-58.html

Sorry folks. No haiku from me right now. I'll be back to write some later.

User avatar
the mingo
Posts: 9708
Joined: June 26th, 2005, 3:51 am
Location: Tug Hill Plateau

Re: feb 2015 ku

Post by the mingo » February 25th, 2015, 11:06 pm

Thx, doreen 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

68degrees
Posts: 658
Joined: October 14th, 2014, 7:47 pm

Re: feb 2015 ku

Post by 68degrees » February 25th, 2015, 11:47 pm

sing me lullabies
soft songs with not too many words
I want to listen

User avatar
judih
Site Admin
Posts: 13399
Joined: August 17th, 2004, 7:38 am
Location: kibbutz nir oz, israel
Contact:

Re: feb 2015 ku

Post by judih » February 25th, 2015, 11:50 pm

when things are smooth
you get a smack on the thigh
no moment unnoticed

(and good night!, 68 degrees)

User avatar
WIREMAN
Posts: 7576
Joined: August 15th, 2004, 7:52 pm
Location: Frederick, Md.
Contact:

Re: feb 2015 ku

Post by WIREMAN » February 26th, 2015, 1:59 am

jump back smack
see u later alligator
plum blossom in snow
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

User avatar
the mingo
Posts: 9708
Joined: June 26th, 2005, 3:51 am
Location: Tug Hill Plateau

Re: feb 2015 ku

Post by the mingo » February 26th, 2015, 9:51 am

plum blossom ?
plum blossom ?
plum blossom !
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

Post Reply

Return to “Haiku”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 23 guests