no apologies haiku

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no apologies haiku

Post by judih » April 24th, 2015, 10:54 pm

yes, it's all wrong
the message abstract
so what

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Re: no apologies haiku

Post by the mingo » April 25th, 2015, 1:00 am

it's like dolphins in the sea
sometimes i think they click and beep
not to say anything other than
to announce they are still around
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: no apologies haiku

Post by judih » April 25th, 2015, 9:54 pm

this small offering
all that's possible
shyly revealed

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Re: no apologies haiku

Post by the mingo » April 25th, 2015, 10:18 pm

and
shyly
observed
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: no apologies haiku

Post by Doreen Peri » April 27th, 2015, 10:53 am

so sorry, my bad
I always apologize
wrong or right

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