May, oh yeah ku

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Re: May, oh yeah ku

Post by judih » May 7th, 2015, 10:22 pm

from above
a small grey head
bent over words

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Re: May, oh yeah ku

Post by the mingo » May 8th, 2015, 6:59 am

dressed in blue
among fading images
old woman prays
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: May, oh yeah ku

Post by judih » May 8th, 2015, 11:00 pm

true or false
now or past
mind takes notes

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Re: May, oh yeah ku

Post by judih » May 9th, 2015, 10:37 pm

surprise visit
trek through mud
arrival at ghost town

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Re: May, oh yeah ku

Post by 68degrees » May 10th, 2015, 9:48 am

happy mother's day
this woman, my wife, my self
children born to us

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Re: May, oh yeah ku

Post by judih » May 10th, 2015, 10:43 pm

of all the mornings
this one has arrived
gotta be grateful

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Re: May, oh yeah ku

Post by the mingo » May 11th, 2015, 12:32 am

shaking, shaking
the ground we stand on
always moving
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: May, oh yeah ku

Post by judih » May 11th, 2015, 10:59 pm

lady on skateboard
balance and terror
no task too large

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Re: May, oh yeah ku

Post by the mingo » May 12th, 2015, 7:52 am

today the cusp
between past & future
time in action
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: May, oh yeah ku

Post by 68degrees » May 12th, 2015, 2:02 pm

our personal space
is between our two shadows
not much there anymore

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Re: May, oh yeah ku

Post by judih » May 12th, 2015, 10:12 pm

what's necessary
overgrows boundaries
superfluous thought

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Re: May, oh yeah ku

Post by the mingo » May 13th, 2015, 6:59 am

our personal space
is between our two shadows
not much there anymore
(Wow - Hell yeah, Mongolia! 8) )
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: May, oh yeah ku

Post by judih » May 13th, 2015, 10:12 pm

blurred lines
where i start and where i stop
still, i say 'i'

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Re: May, oh yeah ku

Post by judih » May 14th, 2015, 9:29 pm

if there's no 'i'
and certainly no 'I'
what is a 'selfie'?

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Re: May, oh yeah ku

Post by the mingo » May 14th, 2015, 10:10 pm

a selfie is the darkness
and the traffic heard
far off in it
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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